frozen light
suspended in time
frozen dreams
imagined and sublime
early morning
darkness slowly abates
consciousness quickens
the sleeper awakes
transitory perceptions
visions left behind
worlds hidden
from the mind
harken voyagers
with limited epistemology
think upon
this construct 'reality'
hidden variables
your models eschew
vulgar unobservables
an ontological stew
pray consider
strict materialists all
something lost
in man's Fall
fragile understanding
truth or lies
trusting naught
with Positivist eyes
pray Science
thou informest men
unresolved e'er
why arrogance then
temporal prison
the philosopher's derision
what then
make a decision
amazing grace
destroys any wall
have faith
Christ restoreth all
bright transcendence
the universe clear
bright belief
nothing to fear
by Zachary Uram
(c) 2010
Nice one Zach!!
ReplyDeleteRhythmic.
ReplyDeleteZach starts his poem career! :)
ReplyDeleteI come, I see and I love it.
ReplyDeleteMark
I like it!
ReplyDeletenice zaach! i like it.
ReplyDeleteWhile I don't really agree with the ideas in the poem, I can certainly tell it is well written! Every line and verse seems well crafted. Nice work =]
ReplyDeleteStark, yet gentle tension here. Press on.
ReplyDeleteI read this poem the other day and came back now to get a second serving. Very nice work!
ReplyDeleteGet busy Zach - one post does not a blog make!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Zach. It makes one think!
ReplyDeleteThis is a comment posted by my friend Yi An Xiang in China. He is a petroleum engineer and now an oil manager. Since Google is blocked in China he could not post the comment:
ReplyDelete(3:50:02 PM) Yi AnXiang: this is the poem I read in my former life and it will be the greatest poem in my whole future life,I appreciate you for saying any kind and friendly words and any comments left by my american buddy.
It's difficult a little bit for me. But I think It's a nice poem :)
ReplyDeleteThanks to everyone for the feedback!
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