Thursday, April 28, 2011

My new poem

"Dissociative Event"

Phase transition
Consciousness shifting

Higher dimensional
Fog lifting

Pure energy
Synaptic liberation

Perception expands
Higher excitation

Ontological freedom
Omnipresent thought

Time redefined
Connections sought

Awareness expands
Darkness flee

A moment
For me

- by Zachary Uram (c) 2011
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7 comments:

  1. AIerApril 28, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    cool poem! are you describing yourself? haha

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  2. Knight TelekineticApril 28, 2011 at 11:49 AM

    ni hao. xie xie, en! hehe

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  3. AnonymousApril 28, 2011 at 7:34 PM

    That about sums it up if to do so is possible. From darkness into the Light. I like it. Thanks for sharing. -Tim Netzley

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  4. Knight TelekineticApril 28, 2011 at 9:58 PM

    You are most welcome Tim. Thanks for the feedback!

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  5. James MaceApril 29, 2011 at 2:47 PM

    I like it too, although it seems ambiguous enough to apply to several scenarios (which is good if what you intended). Humorously, it calls to mind the scene from "Animal House" when they ponder the presence of little universes within their own fingernails: "Like, wow, man!"

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  6. Knight TelekineticApril 29, 2011 at 4:57 PM

    Heh that movie is hilarious. Yes intentional ambiguity. Thanks man!

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  7. Dave AufranceMay 7, 2011 at 5:06 AM

    Very interesting, and yes, moving from darkness to light. I had to use my dictionary on this one! Well done.

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